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Wolfy Oct 6th, 2004 11:52 AM

I can't draw rodents
 
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Hello. I had an idea for a picture, but, although I can picture it in my head, cannot draw it to save my life xP. I can't get the background to look right (that's only very rough at the moment) and I can't seem to do rodent anatomy... Any help is greatly appreciated, and redlines! (or bluelines...)

Dodger Oct 6th, 2004 12:21 PM

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First of all, I really love how you did their heads! ^__^
There're looking so very lovely, I can't draw those guys' heads for my live! XD

Made you a little red-line-thingy, hope it'll help, I'm not that good at them, but I hope it'll be some use for you! :)
What stang my eye first were the legs, I'd show the knees a bit more, since their feet're actually quiet long & they're standing on their toes, they'd bend them kinda like raptors if they'd be standing on their hindlegs, I guess! :)
For the background, you also could use a perspective, pity don't know what the point it all should be heading to is called in english, sorry! XD

CheshireCat Oct 6th, 2004 09:05 PM



there's not enough background there to begin with for me to work with here... im not good with the verbal critiques but hopefully this redline will help.

Wolfy Oct 6th, 2004 11:44 PM

Ooo! That's very helpful! Thanks :) I'll work more on the background today ^_^;

Lycanthrope Oct 7th, 2004 07:22 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Wolverina
For the background, you also could use a perspective, pity don't know what the point it all should be heading to is called in english, sorry! XD

"Vanishing point".... ;-9


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