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Unread Jun 27th, 2010, 05:06 PM   #1
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I need help like right now D8




I've been trying to draw this character all day, but I'm a tremendous failure at drawing human anatomy. I need help- a red line, what I need to fix, anything. I'm trying to finish this by Tuesday for an RP. Help would be greatly appreciated.
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Unread Jun 27th, 2010, 07:46 PM   #2
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The only thing I can spot is that the torso seems a little straight. He/she's bending at the hips only, and isn't bending his/her spine at all. Perhaps doing a little of both would make it look more life like?
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Unread Jun 28th, 2010, 12:32 AM   #3
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I hope this is somewhat useful, I've only done a redline once before and that was a very long time ago. ><

It really looks fine, I think you just need to pay a little more attention to the musculature, but your frame mostly looks right. The only thing that seemed kind of off was the lower half of the torso (it seemed to keep going straight when it should have curved back toward the hips, like domo said) and the positioning of the raised leg. It looks a little like he would be crossing his leg awkwardly across the front of his body instead of having it jut out in the direction that the rest of him is facing.

Then again I could be totally wrong and if so you should just ignore everything I say. >>;;;

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Unread Jun 28th, 2010, 12:49 AM   #4
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Gaaaah. thank you guys!<3
It's female, actually. xD;;
I was just getting the pose down before I got to that though, I should have specified. xD

That's great advice, guys, and thanks for the redline. It helps a lot. :333
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Unread Jun 28th, 2010, 09:16 AM   #5
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Oooooh. >> Eek, sorry about that. My bad. Well, change those man boobies to real boobies then. ^^;
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Unread Jun 28th, 2010, 09:30 AM   #6
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Laaar, don't be, it was really unclear. xD -gives giant bewbies-
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Unread Jul 1st, 2010, 05:54 PM   #7
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Tada? :T
I think the anatomy still needs some work but it works for now.

Now I just need to figure out what color to make her clothes and to fix that hand.
Any suggestions?
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Unread Jul 2nd, 2010, 04:07 AM   #8
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I see her in earthy colours C: like a dark rich green for her cloak, tan for the trousers, and dark brown for the boots.
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Unread Jul 2nd, 2010, 06:34 PM   #9
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Ohh, I never thought of that. :o
She's an earthy character too- good idea!

EDIT: The only thing she's from the desert, so that might be a little dark. :u
Hmm.

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Unread Jul 3rd, 2010, 03:04 AM   #10
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OH she's from the desert? dang. Ummm... well in that case change the cloak to a golden sandish colour?
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Unread Jul 3rd, 2010, 07:24 AM   #11
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woooww thats looking good so far Kavu!
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