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Unread Aug 23rd, 2010, 03:15 PM   #1
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Redline please?



Ignoring the scribbly lines that are psuedo-markers for me to put dark shadows because the far right lion is mostly in the cave entrance, is there anything off about him? Or the others for that matter LOL. I've never really drawn a lion from behind like the far right guy.

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Unread Aug 24th, 2010, 11:37 AM   #2
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Not really from what I can see, only comment would be that his (the right male lion) right paw/leg would be slightly visible if he wasn't lifting it or spreading it >u> that's all, everything else looks pretty darn neat to me!!
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Unread Aug 24th, 2010, 11:51 AM   #3
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Oohh thanks I wasn't quite sure what to do with that unseen leg XD; I'll add that in though.

Do you think the cub in the back looks right here? I originally had somewhat of a body sketched out but erased it to make it look better/neater.



@.@ Ignore the derpy expression on the back cub.


Edit: NVM, I'm redrawing derpy cub LOL
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