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Unread Jan 23rd, 2011, 01:25 PM   #1
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WIP help?

Hi guys! I'm working on a picture and I'd really some critique before I go any further on it. Here it is: http://blackjackconcpiracy.deviantar...ease-194645098

So yeah, redlining, critique on the anatomy, and help with the colors would be awesome if anyone has the time!
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Unread Jan 24th, 2011, 01:34 AM   #2
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You're off to a great start I love the use of colours so far oWo Do you use a particular ref or multiple ones?

I tried looking for a few photo refs of the angle you're drawing in. This is what I found:

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2402/...52f0be9bf0.jpg
http://www.mmeimages.com/userdata/PRODPIC-900.jpg
http://i.ehow.com/images/a07/c1/42/f...ah-200X200.jpg
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2424/...decc325088.jpg

So judging from those photos; I think the ears you drew are a little too thick and perhaps slightly too big aswell. Perhaps the nose is a tad too big too; but all in all I think you're off to a great picture Keep up the great work!
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Unread Jan 24th, 2011, 06:06 AM   #3
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Thanks! I see what you mean about the ears. I'll fix that right away, and I've been using multiple refs. I'll also try shrinking the nose. Thanks!
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