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Unread Jan 17th, 2013, 06:46 PM   #1
Namazzi
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redline help?

It's been years since I've asked for help.. but I'm trying to break out of my general poses. I mainly draw everything from one angle either laying, sitting, or standing. I'm trying to work on new perspectives and angles for poses. but I'm a little stuck. Something about this just doesn't look right. And I can't figure it out. I've tried to look for stock images for reference help even, and that still hasn't helped. So... any help maybe? XD

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Unread Jan 21st, 2013, 04:52 AM   #2
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I'll work on this in a few hours, just in class now, but I know exactly where to help!
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Unread Jan 26th, 2013, 03:14 AM   #3
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For me I'd have to say it's the right front leg and the right back leg that need some tweaking. Otherwise this is looking good
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Unread Jan 27th, 2013, 12:40 PM   #4
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Sorry, I totally forgot about this. I hope this helps a little... This was even though for me xD

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Unread Jan 27th, 2013, 01:12 PM   #5
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Haha, well shoot I made one too and forgot--Drago totally beat me to it. xD I agree with Drago, though the only part I thought was off was the hindlegs--and I drew basically the same thing she did.: http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v1...ps2f81630f.png
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Unread Jan 29th, 2013, 03:56 PM   #6
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WELL. That looks MUCH better!! I think the thing to look for now, is to make the shoulder less awkward with the neck
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