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Unread Apr 28th, 2010, 12:21 PM   #1
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Na'vi Lion help

Ok, so this is something I've been working on and off with for the past few weeks. I find that I like the pose, it just seems lacking. Could anyone give me any pointers? *yes, the tail is wonky. XD*



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Unread Apr 28th, 2010, 02:22 PM   #2
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I'd say it looks pretty good so far. What stands out to me is the fact that the tail is of varying thickness in different places. Might wanna fix that.

EDIT: Nevermind, I just now read where you mentioned the tail.
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Are you just after the Na'vi colouring or after a lionness that looks exactly like the Na'vi, except its a lion? If you're just after the colouring, it looks fine.. no probs there. If you want a Na'vi lion, you need to make it a lot more Outlanders-esque, as the Na'vi are very slender, strong and sinewy. Although it would be an interesting concept, there aren't any chubby Na'vi! lol
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I'd say it looks pretty good so far. What stands out to me is the fact that the tail is of varying thickness in different places. Might wanna fix that.

EDIT: Nevermind, I just now read where you mentioned the tail.
*giggles* It's ok! Thank you though!

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Are you just after the Na'vi colouring or after a lionness that looks exactly like the Na'vi, except its a lion? If you're just after the colouring, it looks fine.. no probs there. If you want a Na'vi lion, you need to make it a lot more Outlanders-esque, as the Na'vi are very slender, strong and sinewy. Although it would be an interesting concept, there aren't any chubby Na'vi! lol
I was just mainly after the coloring tbh, but I think it would be an interesting endeavor to work on slenderizing her and see what comes of it. :3 Thank you for your input on this. :3
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