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Unread Oct 6th, 2004, 10:52 AM   #1
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I can't draw rodents

Hello. I had an idea for a picture, but, although I can picture it in my head, cannot draw it to save my life xP. I can't get the background to look right (that's only very rough at the moment) and I can't seem to do rodent anatomy... Any help is greatly appreciated, and redlines! (or bluelines...)
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Unread Oct 6th, 2004, 11:21 AM   #2
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First of all, I really love how you did their heads! ^__^
There're looking so very lovely, I can't draw those guys' heads for my live! XD

Made you a little red-line-thingy, hope it'll help, I'm not that good at them, but I hope it'll be some use for you!
What stang my eye first were the legs, I'd show the knees a bit more, since their feet're actually quiet long & they're standing on their toes, they'd bend them kinda like raptors if they'd be standing on their hindlegs, I guess!
For the background, you also could use a perspective, pity don't know what the point it all should be heading to is called in english, sorry! XD
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Unread Oct 6th, 2004, 08:05 PM   #3
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there's not enough background there to begin with for me to work with here... im not good with the verbal critiques but hopefully this redline will help.
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Unread Oct 6th, 2004, 10:44 PM   #4
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Ooo! That's very helpful! Thanks I'll work more on the background today ;
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Unread Oct 7th, 2004, 06:22 AM   #5
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For the background, you also could use a perspective, pity don't know what the point it all should be heading to is called in english, sorry! XD
"Vanishing point".... ;-9
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