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Unread Sep 5th, 2004, 10:12 AM   #1
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Somethings missing...

But I can't put my finger on it. I just finished up with this piccy, and something is lacking...I just really can't tell what it is. Any suggestions are welcome! Also any help on how to get the resolution to look better would be great!
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Unread Sep 5th, 2004, 10:24 AM   #2
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The face is what stands out to me as looking a bit "blank". The lines are of a different size and quality on the face. Proportionally, I think it is a bit too small. Try enlarging and re-inking that portion of the picture.

Shading a bit more would also help. Add depth to the floor, add texture to the walls, and add more contrast to her body itself.

I like the pose and the character. I hope you dcontinue working with this piece and don't get fed up with it.
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Unread Sep 5th, 2004, 10:48 AM   #3
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Thanks for the advice Pegs! I'll keep working on it, and am glad you like it.
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