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Unread Dec 18th, 2010, 09:22 AM   #1
Fluffybunny
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Sekhmet Crit

Can I get some crit on my sekhmet lines? Really anything that you think needs improving, though the human body is giving me some difficulty. Oh and the hands too D:



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Unread Dec 18th, 2010, 10:55 AM   #2
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All I see is the left hand, the one shes holding up, the thumb seems to be misplaced c; the rest looks fine to me

edit: made a quick redline, think the hand should be more like this, sorry for the crappiness but I hope you get my point

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