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Unread Nov 2nd, 2004, 06:23 PM   #1
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Improvement?

I feel I've improved a bit on anatomy, but mainly the face. I still have some problems with body proportions. I'm just up for tips :3

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Unread Nov 2nd, 2004, 06:30 PM   #2
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I've always been a fan of your art, and I'm certainly no anatomy guru, -laughs- I really don't see any anatomical problems with that pishoore, -unhelpful- :/
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Unread Nov 2nd, 2004, 06:31 PM   #3
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hehe X) Thanks for the compliment. . thats helpful XD
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Unread Nov 7th, 2004, 12:45 AM   #4
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I've noticed that you tend to default to a 3/4 view with most of your heads. Maybe you should try different angles?
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Unread Nov 7th, 2004, 01:07 AM   #5
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I think it's pretty good. Everyone has their own styles, and yours just happen to look this way. Everything seems rather proportional to me, but I don't check on proportions that much.

Have you tried using construction circles? I think you just have to make sure that all of the features line up (eyes with the nose with the ears with the chin)
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Unread Nov 7th, 2004, 06:05 AM   #6
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the circles never work for me *twitch*

And I know its like, always in 3/4 X.x I've been trying to stray from that and its.. .not working XD

And thanks :3
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Unread Nov 7th, 2004, 10:15 AM   #7
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The main thing that really jumps out at me is how unnaturally skinny she is. True that I haven't seen too many emaciated cats lately, but I think she should have at least a deeper chest and more of a round body. She's also got a long neck, which could be fixed real easy by moving up her shoulder blades a bit. She has a fantastic expression, though, and looks very genuine.
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