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Unread Mar 8th, 2002, 04:26 PM   #1
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Question How are my anthros doing? (Pic inside)

I'm quite proud of this...God, its REAL MEDIA too *L*...

Its Mwogo (yep...I LOVE HER at the moment..), and she's socool.

I think the tail is wrong somehow...*L* but hehe

Can I have some honest critique?

How can I improve?

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Unread Mar 8th, 2002, 04:59 PM   #2
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Your hands are about the only thing Cally.

Like not so much the fingers, but the thumbs. it almost looks like she has two of the same hand in that pic.

Also her feet, that pose wouldn't quite be comfotable to stand. If you try to stand like that in front of a mirror you'll see. Most people tend to make an 'L' shape with their feet.

See Cally you've really got expressions down, nice work with the clothes, and you have the pieces of anatomy there. I think you just need to do some looking at refrences or the mirror to see how anatomy works when you put it all together and you'll be all set.

Maybe get a dynamic figure drawing book, rather then just figure drawing. Not that brushing up on anatomy ever hurts.


But you've come a long way. Great work
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Unread Mar 8th, 2002, 05:03 PM   #3
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wow..cally.. first off.. thats great..!~.. in rm?

you're impoving by leaps and bounds.. its amazing~!


the chest area!~ is perfect..

umm.. honest critique..
unless you're going for a ff8 look.. the arms are a bit too short..
i think that stands out the most...
the finger tips should just reach above her knees stretched.. and with a slight bend.. 2 thirds of the thigh..



and en did the hands *phew*..

cuz my hands are hopeless..~!..

but yeah.. the head is awesome, and the clothing as well~!
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Unread Mar 9th, 2002, 01:23 AM   #4
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WOAH!

That is so awesome!! Love the colours and expression!!! And the body is perfect!!

The only thing I would say..apart from the hands..sorry..is /her/ right leg is a bit akward looking, her thigh is too thin..I think maybe her other leg should be the one that is forward, her right one looks a bit ...bendy..sorry...but the rest is fab!! Fab?...*L*..mondo-hoopy then!! *L*
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Unread Mar 9th, 2002, 04:12 AM   #5
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Eeee, thanks guys!

Hands are evil. Hands me no like at all. >.<

But yay! Thankie for the help! =)
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The Padded Cell.
Marc- *being hugged by Waif..* .. argh! Ow! Ow! You're squashing.. my.. appendix.."
Waif-...o.o...didn't you have that removed?
Marc- *glares* I'd like to have YOU removed...!

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~Eddie Izzard~
Borge- You're so "Qu'est Que C'est"..!
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