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Unread Feb 25th, 2002, 07:40 PM   #1
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ummm help

I did this pic real quick but I'm learning how to draw Disney style humans.....Anyone have any tips?
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Unread Feb 26th, 2002, 08:23 AM   #2
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Well, I can't say I'm a genius in drawing humans, but I'd love helping you as much as I can!
Firstly, that pic really isn't bad! You got the eyes rather good, as well as the body & for a first try it's really very goodie! *nods*
Anyways, here I got a lil', rather quickly done sketch, of that meermaid you got there! Hope it'll help you a bit!
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Unread Feb 26th, 2002, 09:49 AM   #3
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Hmm... all I can think of is maybe make the hair a little smoother? Like Arial's is all round; you don't have to do that much, but maybe a little bit would help.
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Unread Feb 26th, 2002, 09:58 AM   #4
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let's see.. yeah, the hair would be smoother i think. ^^ and the clouds too. i like the hand position though, thats good.
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Unread Feb 26th, 2002, 10:35 AM   #5
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Hmm...okie...

Well I really like the overall pic and pose.

But I might suggest a couple of things. I think your arms might be a touch too short.

But you did very well with showing that their was weight on that arm and the hand.

Also a god job showing the line of the chin and the tilted head.
One thing I might suggest is when draiwng the face do a circle and cross.

Like to show the 'planes' of the face.

Sorry this is tablet pic so it kinda blows. (and here's my little shameful secret...I can't draw a woman to save my life *L*)

But just trying to show how by drawing a circle and little cross and moving that cross it helps you keep in mind the shape of the face.

i wish i could help more but czartoon people and especially women aren't my strong suit at all.

Real nice over all pic though!
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Unread Feb 26th, 2002, 11:47 AM   #6
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thanks for your tips everyone *prances off to go and fix her pic*
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Unread Feb 26th, 2002, 01:53 PM   #7
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Hmm this may be just me, but I think the neck might be a little thick? But i couldn't draw a human for a million ollars...so..ummm...yeah
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