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Unread Feb 28th, 2002, 12:44 PM   #1
Ms. Flambe
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Can you critique my website...? Pwease?

http://www.geocities.com/savagesongbird/

=) I was jus' wondering what you guys thought- I personally like it, but the name's bothering me- too long..*L*

Some of the art on it is REALLY bad..lol, so if you noticed a piece that pisses you off, lemme know =)

*cling*

Nobody needs to reply, though-
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Unread Feb 28th, 2002, 12:53 PM   #2
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do you still want us to do some art pictures from the other thread?..or just this?
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Unread Feb 28th, 2002, 01:11 PM   #3
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*forgot about the other thread* >.< sorry...i'm really flucked up in RL right now *L*** Too busy...

Just this thread, then- I'll delete the other =)
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:: "cally-cat: must be felt to be believed!".../ i find certain things addictive... like pretty drugs ::
The Padded Cell.
Marc- *being hugged by Waif..* .. argh! Ow! Ow! You're squashing.. my.. appendix.."
Waif-...o.o...didn't you have that removed?
Marc- *glares* I'd like to have YOU removed...!

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IIIiiif you've never seen an elephant ski, then you've never been on acid!
~Eddie Izzard~
Borge- You're so "Qu'est Que C'est"..!
Marilyn- More like "what is it?"...
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Unread Feb 28th, 2002, 01:14 PM   #4
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naw..i dun mind doing both!.. just thought you might have sort of combined the two here!
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Unread Feb 28th, 2002, 09:25 PM   #5
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It RAWKS!! *Yay*!!! Cool site Cally! One quetion..I see your using Geocities...how did you get the stationary bar on the right of the screen..?? I have been trying for ages to figure that one out!! Well girl keep up the great work!! Love ya!

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Unread Mar 1st, 2002, 03:39 PM   #6
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I think it's kewl! The only thing that kinda erks me is the pixellated banner, but it's just me and my high-res Photoshop JPEGs messing with my mind. . . :lol
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Unread Mar 1st, 2002, 07:18 PM   #7
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Hello

*ponders* Mind if I do a little layout critique? I'm not exactly sure what you're looking for to be critiqued in this thread, so I'd thought I'd ask .

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Unread Mar 1st, 2002, 10:01 PM   #8
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Hope it's okay if I critique.. ^^; It's a pretty good site.. I can't see some of the images, but I think that's because IE hates me. Hold on, lemme try it with Netscape... still can't see them. *scratches head*My only nitpick is to keep the layout as a monochromatic color - it is more appealing to the eye to have everything coordinated to one color than a variety of colors. Also, the frames. Rather cliche in art sites, those frame sidebars. I should know, I had a frames site just like that over a year ago. XD Nothing wrong with it, makes for easy navigation, but perhaps try something more creative with the navbar, or take off the borders to make it seem more seamless.
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Unread Mar 3rd, 2002, 02:05 PM   #9
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Hey guys! =D

Thanks a LOT for the critique... =)

Helpful, too!
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:: "cally-cat: must be felt to be believed!".../ i find certain things addictive... like pretty drugs ::
The Padded Cell.
Marc- *being hugged by Waif..* .. argh! Ow! Ow! You're squashing.. my.. appendix.."
Waif-...o.o...didn't you have that removed?
Marc- *glares* I'd like to have YOU removed...!

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IIIiiif you've never seen an elephant ski, then you've never been on acid!
~Eddie Izzard~
Borge- You're so "Qu'est Que C'est"..!
Marilyn- More like "what is it?"...
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