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Unread Mar 4th, 2002, 03:08 PM   #1
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First pic of two new characters of mine

Well I am proud of this one. But I know it is not the best. The black wolf and white pup has been a symbol of last year since... well last year. It all started with my page-a-day wolf calendar when last year each day that was good had this black adult wolf and this cute white pup. Each day that the black wolf and white pup appeared it almost in a kind of way about the day. I never really noticed it will the last few days of school last year and those last days were not really the greatest. But anyway in May it will have been a year since these great days and since a Black wolf and White Pup have appeared in the calendar. So I thought that maybe if I made my own pic something good just might happen.

Well hear it is. Let me know what you think. Give me some pointers if you can.
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Unread Mar 4th, 2002, 10:53 PM   #2
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Awww it's cute

I think maybe the white pups eye is a little too high up maybe?
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Unread Mar 5th, 2002, 04:35 AM   #3
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Hmmm, yes, a little too high up . .. also, I think the snout on the black one is a tad too long . . . and the way it's flat on the end isn't quite right . . .it should be a slant, like the white one's . . .^^;;
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Unread Mar 5th, 2002, 11:27 AM   #4
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Oh wow. You guys are good. Thank you. You both are perfectly right. I will work on that.
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Unread Mar 6th, 2002, 12:28 AM   #5
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Cuuuuuuteeeeeeeeee picture !!!!!!!!!
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