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Unread Mar 12th, 2002, 10:23 AM   #1
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Can someone give me help or opinions

Would you guys give me some raptor help if ya can please

the pics are at http://www.lilymud.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=3602
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Unread Mar 12th, 2002, 02:36 PM   #2
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Ee, I hope you don't mind me picking at 'em a lil' bit. ^_^; They're really good pictures for your first try, I know my first raptors were jus'...scribbles of unproportion-ness. O_o; They were awful.

Anywho. :)

I think...that the main thing that's kinda off is the muzzle. It looks too much like a beak(or rather a turtle to me for some reason, where it's pointed at the front). Raptors don't have that, I think their mouths would be more like a lizards...Try the Komodo Dragon for reference if you want. :)

That's the only big thing I see that's off. Other than that, keep it up. ;)
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Unread Mar 12th, 2002, 02:59 PM   #3
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yeah, mouth is the main part you kinna need to look at. instead of it going all in one nice curve, raptors have those mouths that(from a side view) curve up at first like a smile or something, then curve back down like a frown . That's a really stupid description, but that's all my mind's willing to fathom at this point =B. Good luck w/ the dino's! They look cool!! =)
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Unread Mar 12th, 2002, 07:45 PM   #4
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ahhhh i see hmm well I'll work on it and thanks for your help
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